Another poem of mine that got published last week


so far 25% of people feel nothing when they read this and 75% like it
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The sun’s hanging high in the sky
and everything feels the warmth of that statement
even we who walk in the shadows of skyscrapers;

man’s impuissance in front of Nature
is a terrible and dear commodity.

It’s the missing element in the story of Eden.
Having crafted feebleness into our hands
could we really have been kicked out of that closeness?

Eden is here now sitting with us
but like the sun, we cut ourselves off
from the sight of its majesty in the distance,
having built this world on the foundation
of an imaginary separation.

One comment

  1. I’ve been clicking the Like button on your site since early this evening but it seems I couldn’t get through. So I’m going to express my appreciation through comments instead.

    Just want you to know I like the way you write poetry. Something about your style appeals to me.

    Thank you for sharing, Dave

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